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現(xiàn)在上海高考采用的是三加三模式（語數(shù)外+理化生政史地任選三門），以往采用的是三加一模式（語數(shù)外+理化生政史地任選一門），針對這兩種高考模式談談你的看法。你的文章必須包括：
1、比較兩種模式的異同
2、你更喜歡哪種模式并陳述理由.
文章開頭我們需要兩者對比，既然我們已經有了明確的主題，那么在對比的時候就可以有所側重，將三加三的優(yōu)勢與三加一相應的弱勢作為對比點：
When it comes to the difference between two policies, the most obvious one is that the former one put much emphasis on a certain optional course so that it was more demanding for us students while the new one divides the pressure into three categories and we have more freedom to choose our keen subjects for our exams.
這樣的文字經過整理作為開頭——
As college entrance examination policy changes, there is a debate on whether the revolution is necessary or not. When it comes to the difference between the two, the most obvious one is that the former one put much emphasis on a certain optional course. Even though it might partly improve our understanding in one field, it was much more demanding for us students. For the new one, it divides the pressure into three categories and we apparently have more freedom to choose our keen subjects for our exams.(88)
文章開頭算是結束了，接下來到我們的立論段。
首先講明觀點——更加支持三加三新政——from my point of view, the old policy actually pales into insignificance in terms of feasibility and future prospect.
Supporting idea1: we have more chances for the exams so that our risk of performing worse in one exam can be decreased a lot
Supporting idea2:expand our horizons and help cultivate our interests in different field which certainly benefit us in major choosing and job searching in the future.
兩個part相結合就可以作為我們的立論段來進行寫作：
From my perspective, the old policy pales into insignificance in terms of feasibility and future prospect.
Few people would deny that in the past, chances are that if we fail to perform excellently in the final exam, we may lose the opportunity to be admitted into our ideal university. But today, we have less risk since we can have three separate tests in two years and they add up to our total scores.
What——s more, choosing three subjects as our testing items can largely expand our horizons and help cultivate our interests in different field which certainly benefit us a lot in major choosing and job searching in the future.(110)
到這里為止，根據字數(shù)統(tǒng)計來看我們的字數(shù)已經完全足夠，已經可以結尾完成一篇完整的文章了，但老胡還是想給大家展示一下反駁段的寫法，僅供參考，需要自取。
However, some may argue that the concentration on one specific subject is of great importance, but I can——t accept their concept since we can never know what we are interested in with only one course to finish. So the concentration on only one lesson might just be a waste of time.
反駁段的精髓就在于——選擇對方觀點中比較弱勢的觀點，指出對方觀點的不足從而使自己的觀點更加鮮明。
最后我們的結尾部分：
From what has been discussed above, I hold the opinion that the new college entrance examination is better and more suitable for us senior high school students.
至此，這篇文章基本算是完成。
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