具體寫(xiě)作指點(diǎn)思路如下:
一、 寫(xiě)作思路提示
開(kāi)頭
Last year I went to Beijing with my aunt.
去年我和姑姑去北京了。
中間
Beijing is very beautiful. The food in Beijing is very delicious.
北京非常美麗。北京的食物非常好吃。
結(jié)尾
I hope to go to Beijing again.
我希望再次去北京。
二.寫(xiě)作步驟詳解
1. 如何寫(xiě)好開(kāi)頭
①介紹自己旅行的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和人物。
示例:Last year, I went to the Great Wall with my parents.
譯文:去年,我和父母一起去了長(zhǎng)城。
②用疑問(wèn)句引出下文。
示例:Do you like travelling?
譯文:你喜歡旅行嗎?
2. 如何寫(xiě)好中間
①描寫(xiě)目的地的天氣以及景色。
示例:It is sunny in Hainan.
譯文:海南的天氣很晴朗。
②描寫(xiě)旅行目的地進(jìn)行的活動(dòng)。
示例:In Beijing,we saw the Great Wall. It was very beautiful.
譯文:我們?cè)谌毡究吹搅碎L(zhǎng)城,它非常美麗。
3. 如何寫(xiě)好結(jié)尾。
①描寫(xiě)自己的心情。
示例:I am very happy.
譯文:我非常開(kāi)心。
②描寫(xiě)自己的收獲。
示例:I took a lot of pictures and learnt a lot about Beijing.
譯文:我照了很多照片還學(xué)到了很多有關(guān)北京的知識(shí)。
③表達(dá)自己的意愿。
示例:I hope to go to Beijing again.
譯文:我希望能夠再去北京。
經(jīng)典范文
My trip to the Great Wall
This morning my classmates and I got up early to visit the Great Wall. We got there by bus. On our way to the Great Wall,we saw a lot of green fields. When we arrived there,we were very excited. We climbed the Great Wall,and it was very tiring. My friend wanted to give up,but we encouraged her and then we climbed to the top of the Great Wall. From this, I know that if you try your best,you can do anything.
譯文:
我的長(zhǎng)城之旅
今天早晨,我和同學(xué)們?cè)缭缙鸫踩ヅ篱L(zhǎng)城。我們坐公共汽車去的長(zhǎng)城。一路上,我們看到了很多綠色的田野。當(dāng)我們到那兒的時(shí)候,我們非常興奮。然后我們開(kāi)始爬長(zhǎng)城,真是累呀。我的朋友想放棄了,我們都鼓勵(lì)她,最終我們爬上了長(zhǎng)城高處。從這件事情,我明白了一個(gè)道理,只要盡最大努力,你就能成功。
經(jīng)典范文
A trip to Yunnan
Last year I went to Yunnan with my mother. Yunnan is very beautiful. You can enjoy fresh air,green trees and blue sky there. Yunnan is not hot in summer or cold in winter, so people call Kunming,the capital of Yunnan, "the Spring City". The people there are friendly. They like to give you a hand. So Yunnan is a beautiful place with nice weather and kind people. Do you think so?
譯文:
去云南旅游
去年我和我的媽媽去了云南旅游。云南非常美麗。在那里你可以享受新鮮的空氣,綠色的樹(shù)木以及藍(lán)藍(lán)的天空。云南夏天不熱,冬天不冷,所以人們把云南的省會(huì)昆明叫做“春城”。那兒的人們很友好,他們喜歡幫助人。因此云南是一個(gè)天氣良好、民生淳樸的美麗地方。你這樣認(rèn)為嗎?
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