假定你是李華,曾在你校工作的外教 Peter 得知你們最近搬遷到新校區(qū)學(xué)習(xí),來信詢問新校區(qū)的情況,請(qǐng)你給他回封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
1. 介紹新校區(qū)(地理位置,建筑布局,設(shè)施設(shè)備等);
2. 邀請(qǐng)他閑時(shí)來訪。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
命題分析
與全國(guó)卷I書面表達(dá)特點(diǎn)比較:
1. 真實(shí)情景,都與外國(guó)友人或事件有關(guān), 與學(xué)生的生活相關(guān)。
2. 體裁都是應(yīng)用文,采用書信形式。學(xué)生需要了解書信的格式。
3. 都是半開放式作文,給出要點(diǎn),但仍然給學(xué)生留有一定的自由發(fā)揮的空間,有利于學(xué)生充分展示自己的寫作能力。學(xué)生要學(xué)會(huì)補(bǔ)充信息,充實(shí)文章內(nèi)容。
官方范文
Dear Peter,
I am really glad to hear from you. Things have changed quite a lot since you were last at our school. The biggest change is probably our new campus which you might be interested to know more about. (寫信背景、寫信目的)
The new campus is more conveniently situated, within walking distance of the city center. As a result, now we have easier access to public facilities than before.(要點(diǎn)1.地理位置:主題句+拓展句) On campus, areas of different functions are scientifically laid out, with the modern teaching block standing in the middle, surrounded by other functional areas like the library, the gym and the stadium, etc. In all four corners of the campus lie beautiful gardens of different themes. Above all, equipped with a computer and a smart screen, the spacious classrooms help create an ideal atmosphere for our daily study.(要點(diǎn)2、3:建筑布局、設(shè)施設(shè)備)
Do remember to drop by when you have time! Our new campus is well worth a visit.(要點(diǎn)4:邀請(qǐng)閑時(shí)來訪)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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