懲罰權(quán)英語(yǔ)作文 關(guān)于懲罰權(quán)的英語(yǔ)作文

作文題：教育部發(fā)布了一項(xiàng)給中小學(xué)教師的懲罰權(quán)的規(guī)定，請(qǐng)談?wù)勀愕囊庖?jiàn)和建議。of8答案圈

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China’s Ministry of Education issued a new regulation allowing primary and middle school teachers to take disciplinary actions against their students, to which the public respond with different opinions. (29wds)of8答案圈

(一件事引起不同的觀點(diǎn)，有很多表達(dá)方式，但是這種還是很是很獨(dú)特的：…, to which the public respond with different opinions.)of8答案圈

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Personally, the policy facilitates students’ sound growth. First, it can impress them by the importance of rules and regulations, which are the cornerstone of a good community. Those who break them but get away with punishment will take it for granted and likely commit crimes in future. Besides, it hangs like Damocles' Sword and help cultivate self-discipline.of8答案圈

However, the policy serves its purpose only when applied properly. For one thing, physical punishment should be accompanied by psychological help so that pupils can realize the root of their misbehavior. For another, it shouldn’t do harm to their health, not to mention insulting them.of8答案圈

In conclusion, since the disciplinary action can mend one’s way and keep schools running on the track, why should we say no to it?. (126wds)of8答案圈

寫(xiě)作思路上：從兩個(gè)方面：1. 規(guī)矩的重要性 2.有利于學(xué)生的自律。of8答案圈

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1.說(shuō)讓人意識(shí)到重要性，可選詞匯很多，我用的是impress…by the importance of….后面的非限制性定從實(shí)際上是具體說(shuō)明重要性為何，此處用了比喻：the cornerstone of a good communityof8答案圈

2.闡述重要性，不僅從正面寫(xiě)，還從反面寫(xiě)：如果違反規(guī)則卻不受懲罰，會(huì)有怎樣的后果。of8答案圈

3.第二點(diǎn)我一帶而過(guò)了，實(shí)際上還可以充分展開(kāi)的，這里用了諺語(yǔ)：Damocles' Swordof8答案圈

4.主題句一定要簡(jiǎn)潔，不要拖泥帶水，所以我這里這樣寫(xiě)的：of8答案圈

Personally, the policy facilitates students’ sound growth.of8答案圈

However, the policy serves its purpose only when applied properly.of8答案圈

尤其是第二句，雖然看起來(lái)簡(jiǎn)單，但實(shí)際上是包含了省略結(jié)構(gòu)，可以借鑒一下。of8答案圈

5.最后一段或最后一句力求簡(jiǎn)潔，但一定要有力，不建議用老套的句型，不妨用反義疑問(wèn)句。of8答案圈