寫作解析:
本文是要感謝自己的一位老師,用第一人稱和第三人稱相結(jié)合來寫作,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主,寫作內(nèi)容必須包含對老師的印象(可以描述外貌,也可以描述性格)、感謝老師的原因(可以分類列出原因,也可以直接用一個事例。如果是描述具體事例,要注意用一般過去時。)以及對老師的祝福。這三個要點缺一不可。結(jié)構(gòu)上,可用本文給出的開頭直接引出寫作對象——自己想感謝的老師,然后簡單介紹這位老師,如年齡、外貌、性格等。接著通過記敘一個典型的事例來表達(dá)對該老師的感激之情。最后,與開頭相呼應(yīng),再次表達(dá)感激之情并給出對老師的祝福。
范文參考:
It's time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I'm here to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Tan. She is one of the best teachers that I have met.
Miss Tan is a pretty young lady. She is of medium height and has long straight hair. She is very kind and friendly to us, but she is very strict with us in our studies.
Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me not to give up and promised to help me. Meanwhile, she helped me understand every single question patiently. Thanks to her, I’ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made great progress in English.
I really want to say thanks to Miss Tan. The love and support from her will be with me forever. I hope she will be happier and healthier in the future. Best wishes for her.
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