I can be a winner
Can a man regarded as no talent in sports still become a successful athlete? Allen did it. He persisted and never gave up his love of the Marathon. In the story, injured as one of his ankles was, he later finished the whole race and got a medal.(第一段與所要求的D篇閱讀故事吻合,并做了summary簡述,同時用形式倒裝的寫作方法,引出學(xué)生自己的下文。)
This is a vivid and lively example in which we can see that ‘there must be a use for my talent. I can be a winner.’(與作文中心思想契合且突出本文核心論點:天生我才,每個人都是贏家。)Several points analyzed below may help us gain an insight into the meaning as described in the example. (經(jīng)典模板句引出自己的想法。)
As a matter of fact, everyone is a gift created by the God, which means everyone has the potential to be successful. Most importantly, what makes most successful people stand out is their devotedness to the job they are doing. I still remember the time when I prepared for my Robot coding competition last summer. All the procedures seemed complicated for me. However, I still believe that I offered to dedicate myself to coding and persisted in it late into the midnight. Encountering every mistake in coding, I consulted and discussed with my teacher all night and even neglected sleeps. With so much perseverance and devotedness, I finally won the game. (舉自己參加編程比賽的例子,引出如何做才能做到是人生的贏家:堅持和投身對事業(yè)的熱愛。)
From what have been mentioned above, what really counts is not how talented you are, but how persevering you are. As far as I am concerned, great efforts should be made to build the dedication and perseverance. Only by doing so can we definitely enable ourselves to be a winner in our life. (最后,用倒裝句突出全文中心思想。)
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